Love Fight

      You are my trouble every day
      I don`t you see and don`t you say.
      I want touch to your slips and breast,
      but you are far from me, as Everest

      My heart broke and be cry,
      And my life moving to a lay.
      But you inspire life to me,
      if only looked you at me...

      My soul tear to the sky,
      And mind to blear, body to tie,
      But i be come to normal life
      When seen my love witch you heart fight.

      Your fancy grown in my head
      I don't know, love me you, or not.
      Exactly known only one,
      I love you, and be love you one.

                01.04.2005


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Is seems to me you have to improve your grammar, but this poem is romantic and quite unusual.I like it:))

With best regards,

Tanya

Елена Волкова Ильинская   03.11.2010 21:58     Заявить о нарушении