Sun

A smile is shining on your pretty face,
You brighten all the things you look upon.
But I would like that smile to erase,
And I would like that brightness to be gone.

You always seem so happy, so naive,
You truly are the star of warmth and light.
I do feel sadness every time I watch you leave,
But somehow in my soul I love the night.

I love the nightly stars that dot the sky,
I love the Moon that gives a tender shine.
I love your absence, please don’t ask me why,
I hate you, yet I want you to be mine.

I long for warmth that you can give away,
I promise, I no longer shall be shy.
I’ll open up to you, just look my way,
My cruel Sun, the devil of July…


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This poem is kind, touching and bitter... I admire it a lot and sorry for your feelings...

Кейти   23.02.2005 20:24     Заявить о нарушении
Thank you. Thank you very much =)
I don't know how to comment, really. You've described it a few words, but better than i would be able to =)

Шуйский   24.02.2005 02:42   Заявить о нарушении
I've just said what I feel=)
Your works are special, but this one...
Luck and inspiration!!!=)

Кейти   24.02.2005 06:44   Заявить о нарушении
Luck and inspiration to you, too =)
Thank you for coming by

Шуйский   24.02.2005 15:26   Заявить о нарушении
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