If this world is wrong, create your own world!

Screaming children take falling stars away
You don't need the Sun, you just need one ray
Everybody goes but you want to stay
Are you blame for it? Why have you to pay?

Fly or die, - they say. You're beside the light
Dreaming of the best, of another life
Life is single, my friend. And I must report:
If this world is wrong, create your own world

When you scream for more, then they start to laugh
But don't close doors - this is not enough
Save yourself, come on! Make it on the spot
If this world is wrong, create your own world

I can show how. Do you wanna it?
I can break your spleen, I can make the split
You and me, we are of another sort
If this world is wrong, create your own world

Losing in your dreams, falling in the deep
Can you see the things we see when we sleep?
Yes? O.K. All right. So, you're aboard
People world is wrong, if you have your world


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If this world is wrong - then you ARE aboard
In your own splin, having no Lord
If this world is wrong - you can fly or die
Having what to loose, choosing what to find
Life is just a blink, don't be a stray
Just enjoy the SUN, not a single ray

Ксения Девяткина   07.02.2008 19:44     Заявить о нарушении
very fine! your words seem to mine...

thank you for these lines!!!

PS. I think, it's better: life is just a blink, do not be a stray

Linn L.Kravts   07.02.2008 22:39   Заявить о нарушении
I'm glad that my reply made you meditate... nevertheless, I prefer that very line, which you've read. Author's purport is sacred:)

Ксения Девяткина   08.02.2008 09:15   Заявить о нарушении
На это произведение написаны 2 рецензии, здесь отображается последняя, остальные - в полном списке.