Astro-genesis

Lagoon and other nebulae


Spheres and spires and funnels
metamorphose and disintegrate
amid the mass of interstellar
dust and gas from worlds expired,
recycled as placental clouds
drawn in by force of gravity,
quickening to spirals
around denser embryonic cores,
whorls and whirlpools,
carousels in space
transformed to spinning gyres
that heat as they rotate, becoming
blinding incandescent orbs
as out of cosmic debris,
chaos seeks its counterpoise
in form, and out of swirling,
inchoate confusion,
stars are born.




Nebula NGC 604


A cosmic pomegranate
sowing iridescent garnet seeds,
fluorescing and candescing,
birthing swarms
of scintillating bees,
NGC 604 should bear
a name commensurate
with creativity
that sprays graffiti
on a massive scale,
the glowing pellets bursting
like gargantuan neon grenades
through fifteen hundred
light years of the galaxy,
in colours that evoke a million
psychedelic peacock tails,
morphing into visions beyond mind's
assumed parameters,
presenting forms imagination
cannot replicate,
phantasmagoric spectacles
the camera lens cannot contain,
synaesthetic imagery
no language can embrace…


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Jena, these poems (especially the first one) are among the very best you have written. Nobody has ever created such a tremendous vision of space in poetry. You may well be credited with the invention of a new language and previously-unheard-of imagery.

Vlanes   13.01.2005 22:12     Заявить о нарушении
What can I say? I'm genuinely astonished to read such comments, having almost decided against placing these poems on public view, since I believed them inferior and unworthy of attention - truly! So thank you indeed for your redemptive appraisal. I'm reassured by it, though not convinced...

Jena Woodhouse   14.01.2005 01:01   Заявить о нарушении