*** To leave the love as anything unknown

To leave the love as anything unknown,
To make mistake and never ever fall,
To close the soul when becoming blind,
To borrow you and not be able find.

To see the sun and feel as you are right?
And give the chance somehow for me to fight.
To give you choice of staying in or out,
And  live my body in the street in crowd.


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Rather hard to understand the exact meaning of the words, but still very beautiful.
With respect,

Георгина   18.12.2004 21:13     Заявить о нарушении
sometimes its more difficult to understand what your soul wanted to say exactly, but i try...
thank you for concideration and i hope it would be beautiful not only for you and other readers, but also for the person for whom i wrote it
thank you again and best wishes in your creations

Ника Павлович   22.12.2004 01:25   Заявить о нарушении