DO YOUR DO

… and you do your do, nothing behind,
nothing ahead, nothing aside. Nothing.
City breath. Up to you. Past. Present. Future.
Deeper. Fuller. Lower. Senses edged.
Amazed by globed pelvises. Thank god, it exists!
Vagina. Forever globed. … your do.
Egress noble. Else, is crime. Morals.
Open --- make it out. Open --- make it in.

… and he doesn’t have teeth, yet you smile,
he makes you smile --- face of happy and no worry.
His escort is young and of tempt. She.
Gorgeous. Up to a world. Black. Fifteen.
Retorts in angel-laughs. Hands held overtly.   
Bulging stomach. She got it. She got… him?
Eye ties are split by a gawky stop at a red
Light making her read a bus ad… AIDS

… they are used to it. No tears, hands… clutched.


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I don’t understand, Fern. Sorry, but why you write “Vagina”?
This is vulgar word.
Buy.

Алессандро Альберио   19.05.2008 19:23     Заявить о нарушении
It was used for the reasons of revolt and awakening of reader’s literary consciousness :)

bye-bye

Fern   20.05.2008 00:15   Заявить о нарушении
It is joke. Where in this verse «reader’s literary consciousness»?

Алессандро Альберио   20.05.2008 09:14   Заявить о нарушении
hehehe, joker you! :) When you embody a social or a philosophical issue in your script using unorthodox means of expression it gets one to ponder, if not argue, issues stated.

Fern   20.05.2008 13:10   Заявить о нарушении
На это произведение написаны 4 рецензии, здесь отображается последняя, остальные - в полном списке.