Rain mood

Fast staccato, a rain on the roof…
Silver strings of small beads in the move.
Flashing lights draw zigzags in the sky,
thunders echo. My dreams let me fly.
Rain fingers play swift to commove
do not sleep, walls of water fill grooves.
Thirsty grounds…My garden was dry.
Rushing clouds jazz melodies try.

Trees will pass out graceful young leaves.
Slowly buds sign this spring’s new motifs.
From the ocean, red sun brings my prize
as it climbs Heaven’s dome in sharp rise.
Rain puddles reflect flowing sleeves
of the colourful blouse sun weaves,
crimson flashes with orange wet dries
on the blue linen shirt in the skies.


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Lena, do you like the rain? I think so because it comes in your poems very often. On the whole I like it. Your style is very very very interesting. I got two your poems by heart!
Sincerely yours
Julina

Юлия Паршута   05.04.2005 21:06     Заявить о нарушении
Dear Julia,

Thank you. Rain in Australia usually a very positive affair, as water is something that always in demand. Additionally the change from nearly constant sunshine is refreshing.

It is so great to have you as my reader. Visit again

Lena

А Н Е Л   11.04.2005 13:38   Заявить о нарушении