u will stay...

It doesn’t matter if you far away -
I don’t care - you will stay
In my heart for some time!
I love you  - and it’s my crime!
I don’t know how you feel,
But I hope, your love’s real!
Your look at me’s like tender touch
And day-by-day I love you much


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Simple and nice! however, I think "look at me’s like tender" needs correction.

But this is just my opinion. Author is always right)))

with respect,
Tina

Tina   15.11.2004 18:24     Заявить о нарушении
"Author is always right)))" - thnks ))

Елена Ляшко   06.06.2005 22:00   Заявить о нарушении