One can waste his breath, being quite sincere,
saying, it all happened by chance...
But, somebody once had invited us here,
and we meet one another at once.
And when you believe in the truth of this Act,
there appears a strange effect
when each our meeting is a wonderful fact
of a super great respect...
Our errors? why? - they'll fall thick in our chests;
Foggy night through the window is sieving.
We again feel our being unexpected guests -
The host is asleep, so we must be leaving...
Bunbeg, Ireland 04.11.04
Fm a. makarevich???
© Copyright: Александр Здориков, 2004
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As a whole it is not bad, but I would correct mistakes.
С уважением,
Cler 17.12.2004 12:16 • Заявить о нарушении
С уважением,
Cler 17.12.2004 12:16 • Заявить о нарушении
Which ones, Madame?
Please be as precise as to point these out.
С не Меньшим к Вам,
GLAZ
Александр Здориков 17.12.2004 14:48 Заявить о нарушении
Please be as precise as to point these out.
С не Меньшим к Вам,
GLAZ
Александр Здориков 17.12.2004 14:48 Заявить о нарушении
Hi Claire!
Oh, I see one! Corrected.
Thank you.
VALE!
Александр Здориков 17.12.2004 14:53 Заявить о нарушении
Oh, I see one! Corrected.
Thank you.
VALE!
Александр Здориков 17.12.2004 14:53 Заявить о нарушении