You’re the best thing I’ve known.
There’s angel’s eyes in my soul.
Can you hear my voice calling you out?
There’re feelings in me so cold,
But I can’t make them out.
There’s some features in the night,
Can you feel them now?
Don’t make me sure, you’re all right.
That won’t do…
The night is coming down,
You’re away from me now.
While I’m stayin’ at this place
I don’t want any time to waste.
Some things I left apart
Will never come to visit me.
And my lonely heart
Away from me
Will flee…
Mist Of Hesitation
© Copyright: Юлия Холод, 2004
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ya 'now, while reading this stuff i've imaged unseenable tentacles, stretching from the very deep of the heart into the endless darkness of the night. Soundless scream, falling into abyss... And noone there to help...
So, can say 4 sure that you've created one of the most impressive poems in Eng. I've read therefore.
Good to go!
Стигмат 07.08.2005 03:49 • Заявить о нарушении
So, can say 4 sure that you've created one of the most impressive poems in Eng. I've read therefore.
Good to go!
Стигмат 07.08.2005 03:49 • Заявить о нарушении
Oh, you've discribed such a beatiful picture of my feelings, really just what it is; the picture is so romantic, sensive and exspressive...it's just fabulous...!
It is just exactly what I wanted the readers to feel...
I'm so proud of your point of view!=) Thank U so Much!
With huge regards,
Юлия Холод 07.08.2005 18:17 Заявить о нарушении
It is just exactly what I wanted the readers to feel...
I'm so proud of your point of view!=) Thank U so Much!
With huge regards,
Юлия Холод 07.08.2005 18:17 Заявить о нарушении
Ya, right, ya know... I've just felt the same one time - you know it was like if you trying to catch a ghost. You try to give him a hang - but feel only mist in your hands... Your poem, definitely goes to my "Favorites" folder. =)
Стигмат 08.08.2005 06:52 Заявить о нарушении
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