You can give without loving, but you can't love without giving.
I just want to be with you:
Kiss your lips and feel you're breathing.
Touch your eyes and know: it's true-
Love without thoughts of missing.
I just want to hear sometimes
That you need me as I do.
Don't let people give advice:
Love is only law for you.
You're the best and you are mine-
That's the only true for me.
I love you for all the time...
Know it just and let it be.
For you
© Copyright: Маргарита Ляпина, 2004
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My congratulations!
Beatiful poem!
Though some rhymes are not excellent (breathing-missing, sometimes-advice) :-)
But Don't Mind It! Cause feelings are untouchable. Really untouchable...
With best wishes,
D.K.
Комаров Дмитрий Алексеевич 07.11.2004 21:25 • Заявить о нарушении
Beatiful poem!
Though some rhymes are not excellent (breathing-missing, sometimes-advice) :-)
But Don't Mind It! Cause feelings are untouchable. Really untouchable...
With best wishes,
D.K.
Комаров Дмитрий Алексеевич 07.11.2004 21:25 • Заявить о нарушении
Thank's a lot. Your opinion is really important for me though my lover's opinion is beyond others. But I'm really happy you like it.
Thank's a lot (once more :) )
Margarita
Маргарита Ляпина 15.11.2004 23:53 Заявить о нарушении
Thank's a lot (once more :) )
Margarita
Маргарита Ляпина 15.11.2004 23:53 Заявить о нарушении