Есть такие дни – уже не осень,
Но еще не властвует зима.
Словно древний Хронос Землю бросил,
И Земля – невольница сама.
(Все часы показывают восемь,
И теряют смысл все слова).
В вязких путах тонкие березы
В паутине длительных минут,
В тишине украдкой цедят слезы,
Вызволенья из неволи ждут.
Сердце безымянный ужас гложет,
В каждый час впрессованы века…
Тянется и кончиться не может
Непреодолимый День Сурка.
24/10/2003
День Сурка
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Интересный стих, Оксана!
Bill Murray с его "Groundhog Day" был бы, несомненно, счастлив узнать, что Вы его таким образом увековечили! :))
С уважением,
George
Чорный Георг 30.09.2005 05:44 • Заявить о нарушении
Bill Murray с его "Groundhog Day" был бы, несомненно, счастлив узнать, что Вы его таким образом увековечили! :))
С уважением,
George
Чорный Георг 30.09.2005 05:44 • Заявить о нарушении
Oh, dear, You're so pleased about teasing me, George :)
Thank You so much :)
Резникова Оксана 30.09.2005 16:17 Заявить о нарушении
Thank You so much :)
Резникова Оксана 30.09.2005 16:17 Заявить о нарушении
I am not teasing you at all, on the contrary, I am deadly serious. :))
You know, people always want to do something that they cannot, or to achieve something which is very far from their normal field of achievements... For instance, there were many great comical actors who always wanted to play in dramas... Who knows! Bill Murray could just as well be one of those people! He might want to be able to write poetry - and suffer from not being able to! Or, even if he does write some poetry (again, who knows!) he may want to write it in Russian! :))
Best regards,
George
Чорный Георг 01.10.2005 05:40 Заявить о нарушении
You know, people always want to do something that they cannot, or to achieve something which is very far from their normal field of achievements... For instance, there were many great comical actors who always wanted to play in dramas... Who knows! Bill Murray could just as well be one of those people! He might want to be able to write poetry - and suffer from not being able to! Or, even if he does write some poetry (again, who knows!) he may want to write it in Russian! :))
Best regards,
George
Чорный Георг 01.10.2005 05:40 Заявить о нарушении
George, I have to ask You for a favour...
Please, look at my translation of "Freedom?" by Black Fox. All advices, recomendations and improvements will be accepted with much gratitude...
Резникова Оксана 01.10.2005 11:09 Заявить о нарушении
Please, look at my translation of "Freedom?" by Black Fox. All advices, recomendations and improvements will be accepted with much gratitude...
Резникова Оксана 01.10.2005 11:09 Заявить о нарушении
Dear Oxana,
Of course I'll have a look at it, no problem! Just let me know how should I communicate to you my suggestions, OK? We can do it through the email, unless you prefer me to write them down right on the the page under your poem (which, I have to admit, you've done a good job with, I was really impressed!)
Yours sincerely,
George
Чорный Георг 03.10.2005 03:37 Заявить о нарушении
Of course I'll have a look at it, no problem! Just let me know how should I communicate to you my suggestions, OK? We can do it through the email, unless you prefer me to write them down right on the the page under your poem (which, I have to admit, you've done a good job with, I was really impressed!)
Yours sincerely,
George
Чорный Георг 03.10.2005 03:37 Заявить о нарушении
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