"Men, don't bathe!" she says, "Your smell is so sweet!"
In such a velvety voice, so sensuous, so sweet, so seductive.
That Lady's got the power,
Her mighty voice,
I'm melting like in a hot shower.
I'm becoming like Swiss fondue.
With all due respect, Madam, with all due respect.
I hear you, you are a tigress, not a kitten.
Please don't eat me,
If I say, "You are mistaken,
Rotten smell is not sweet.
Rotten, old smell is well, just rotten.
But I've taken my shower
Recently,
I smell sweet, as "the nectar of the flower the hummingbird sucks"
Fly to me.
Fly into my petals!
Drunkn and Brazn Poem
© Copyright: Ринат Магсумов, 2004
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What the heck! I became the reader of my own poem somehow they will penalize me. They'll take away hard-earned bunus points. Poor me!
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By the way, it says I've got 4 reviews to this poem. How can I read them? I click and click and I get 5#$^@@.
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By the way, it says I've got 4 reviews to this poem. How can I read them? I click and click and I get 5#$^@@.
Ринат Магсумов 12.04.2004 22:52 • Заявить о нарушении