The buds of withheld spring

The buds of withheld spring -
Puffed lips of ‘xpectant nature.
Wet grass, decay to green –
‘Duced tricks of ‘sistent venture
That you are part of.

Glass shattered o’re the floor,
In good of moods of bad.
Your door, my door – his door.
Blue-green to brown-red -
You n’er was part of..

Doors, opened by wind.
You come? You go? Staying?
Someone has gravely sinned.
Puffed buds are flower praying.
Per your consent.

Spring – ho! – is battle call.
Womb burst in every colour.
I question one and all.
Sexed one, was he of valor
That… I am of?


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Just exquisite!
Also, makes me think of Lord Byron
Wonderfully written!
Best regards,

Гладиатор   11.04.2004 21:53     Заявить о нарушении
:)

… the phrase “a call of nature” gets a new meaning ;))))

Thanks.

Fern   12.04.2004 18:37   Заявить о нарушении
it IS spring after all, mate, isn't it?:))

Гладиатор   12.04.2004 19:37   Заявить о нарушении
...still rains here, yet can't complain, by every other meaning IT IS!

Fern   14.04.2004 16:24   Заявить о нарушении
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