Brokenhearted

When I come into my room I pick up pieces,
pieces of my broken heart
And I realize how much I've lost and it takes me all,
takes me all apart
I'm looking in the mirror and I can't really see,
& what I don't see at all is me.
I'm walking down the streets, I'm searching for someone
With music in my head, with consciousness so numb.
I'm looking for the one, the one that always free
I'm looking not for him I'm searching for just me.
Dissolving in the mud of city roads & trash
I'm rambling all around without any mash.
They used to be my friends and kept me off from dust
I'm pushing them away 'cause I'm afraid to trust.


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You know my will is broken
You've got my heart on hold
I'm lying here in pieces, so cold.
It gets so hard to handle
All the things you need to say
But I guess I heard it all before anyway.
Is love such a blessing or a curse
Either way truth hurts.

Well there'll be no more running
Now I've got you face to face.
I want to know who you've been loving in my place
You say I had it coming
Try to hold my head up high
Love gave me wings and left me paralyzed.

There's nothing left alive
As we watch the spirits die
The world keeps turning
My heart keeps learning
Do you know where the guilty sleep?

Babe I've got my pride
Somehow I will survive
The world keeps turning
My heart keeps learning
Do you know where the lonely sleep tonight?

Another fallen angel
How far I just can't tell
Living without love is a living hell
Why is love such a blessing or a curse
Baby either way truth hurts.

С удовольствием почитал Ваши стихи. Очень музыкальные и интересные.
Удачи!
С уважением,

Латур   02.04.2004 14:46     Заявить о нарушении
За музыкальные отдельное спасибо! Я стараюсь... :)
Ваше произведение очень замечательное. меня тронуло.
so close to what I feel inside...

thank you,

respect,

Step-Child   02.04.2004 21:57   Заявить о нарушении
Эх, to be honest, это не мой стих.
Песня моих любимых Deep Purple. Почему-то Ваш стих навеял именно эти строчки.
Удачи!

Латур   03.04.2004 00:40   Заявить о нарушении
Да... Deep Purple - это хорошо...
Простите, не признала :( Поколение MTV уже не помнит золотые имена музыки :( Печально. Обещаю исправиться :)
Все равно, огромное спасибо за отзыв!!!

respect,

Step-Child   04.04.2004 00:02   Заявить о нарушении