I ll Write These Poems

I have dream, I see this day,
I see from beginning to end,
I'll write these poems, its language mine.
That's why you don't understand.
I'm thinking about
What happened before.
I'm thinking about
I'm strong.
I see at this night
You've opened the door,
I was in your arms
So long.
I write these poems,
I write because
I want to see
Where is end.
I write these poems.
Its language yours.
So why don't you understand?


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I like it.
It needs some polishment though. I can assist you if you like. Leave your e-mail and I'll send you a letter. Or write me on freshbrain@mail.ru

Андрей Брынов   15.03.2005 14:32     Заявить о нарушении
Thank you, you can write me on mirra1980@rambler.ru or
tpimenov@nd.edu
I would be happy to know your ideas.
My real name is Tatiana

Татьяна Пименова Поэтесса82   15.03.2005 14:47   Заявить о нарушении