Here comes nothing

Fern

When my morning flower lips for the dew,
I greet it with a stare silent. Seem of years
long, and hours small. Swathed in purity
Distilled, with a single tremble, it brakes
Every spell sinister. I love watching it
Loving itself, taking its time ray bathing.
In the eye-rays of mine. Leaning forward,
It opens its dewed petals thinly. Eternity
Smiling. It touches my lips covetly.
I have to use words, I can’t linger mute.
... she is waiting... okay... here comes nothing...

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Imenno eto slovo i rodilos v moej golove posle prochtenija pochemu-to, poetomu i prodolzhaju na russkom. Chitala, kak budto eto ne stihotvorenie v 11 strok, a tom sochinenij. Takoe vpechatlenie, chto proshlo mnogo vremeni. Kogda ja otorvala glaza ot kompjutera, ja ochen udivilas, chto proshlo lish neskolko minut. Amazing.

Thanks for your work, amazing, Fern, thank you

Antonina Elfa

Антонина Эльфа 11.04.2004 03:58 • Заявить о нарушении

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:)

the last sentence should be changed to the following:

Thanks for your work, amazing Fern, thank you :)))))))

Back from NY --- exultant nightless weekend… to be recurred.

Yours in need of sleep :)))

Thank you for you comment.

Fern 12.04.2004 18:43 Заявить о нарушении

:)) haha
Fern, I was sooo right about your qualities, one of which is modesty:)
Well done anyway. Have some sleep, I have a feeling that many sleepless weekends are ahead of you still.

Yours, in need of sleepless nights, Antonina Elfa
:)

Антонина Эльфа 12.04.2004 20:59 Заявить о нарушении

I thank God for my humility. :)

Sleeping in London is a sin before God. :) Any plans on visiting the US?

Fern 14.04.2004 16:22 Заявить о нарушении

Haha:) Well, dont know if its a sin now, I have done my fair share of sleepless nights in London (have been here since 17, so you can imagine). No plans as yet, although would love to go sometimes. The thing is I have seen "Bowling for Columbine" by Michael Moore recently, so that means that I will not go to US alone any time soon (at least before some nicer documentary will eraze that film from my memory)

PS: how long have you been living in the US?

Антонина Эльфа 15.04.2004 05:41 Заявить о нарушении

This time you sound like a mother of four and scared :)))) By a coincidence/providence I watched this movie too. Almost went to rampage whities that night. :)))) 17 and in London --- Queen the Mother herself would be envious of you ;)))) I am here in DC since 19 and still having my share of loving and fun at the Nations Capitol. Send me your pic, or post one on your page for I am intrigued to know what you look alike ;)))))

Best!

Fern 15.04.2004 18:09 Заявить о нарушении

:) I sound like many people depending on the mood i guess
I have no pic. yet on this laptop as I killed my new one recently in the accident involving a can of coke - bad drink it is.) I have some pic-s on the net, posted some time ago, will send you a link by mail if u are curious. May be u will be able to tell me if it will be a good idea to post one on this site as soon as i will be able to connect the scanner.
PS: let me know if I look like a mother of four - thats what I am curious about:) haha
God, u make me laugh a lot!

Антонина Эльфа 16.04.2004 01:27 Заявить о нарушении

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