Свечи и лунные огрызки...

Пламя свечи
Сном наполняет глаза:
Будет ли утро?..


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Лунным огрызком
Рассвет подавился
И умер. Что дальше?..


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To underestimate your sheer talent is a sin worse than lying to yourself. So don't minimize your perfect writing skills. It is my opinion, you have the right not to share it:))

By the way, where did you study English?

<Евгения Шеховцова> - 2004/07/02 02:39

Excuse me, I just noticed it!
I'm studing English at the University :) Last year I get the First Certificate (in Europe), this year I'm getting the Advanced (University's rules!) :)
Studing Economics :-D
With a smile,
;)

Scrutineer   14.09.2004 15:23     Заявить о нарушении