A Gaithersburgian gent

A Gaithersburgian gent
‘dulged stogies during great lent
With stomach in holes
And lungs – pair of coals
He had no need to repent.


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A Liverpudlian cove
‘dulged stories in an alcove
Sa partenaire said, come on!
C'est un grand mauvais ton
And the coloring also is mauve

Clittary Hilton   12.03.2005 22:30     Заявить о нарушении
Hey! What's cookin'? Excited to learn you are still about! A bit unclear on the use of ‘dulged --- is it listening or telling? And why you don’t like lavender? :)))

Fern   14.03.2005 23:19   Заявить о нарушении
I guess both... also, one can omit "in" on both sides of 'dulged

Clittary Hilton   15.03.2005 01:55   Заявить о нарушении
:)

my latest life attempt is to include everything of value into it, but for the most part it leads to more deliberately made omissions rather than enclosures :)

Corpses made of lavender,
Olives made of grass,
If you know who I am,
You can kiss my …

:)))

Fern   15.03.2005 22:53   Заявить о нарушении