My depression

Gaijin
I made my decision
Under  compression.

Someone broke my will,
And now I just kill

Everything is said,
Everything is made

But only one thing is to be asked:
“WHY SILENSE IS SO LOUD!!!!!!!!!”
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Written under magical forces


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I'm afraid those "magical forces" have not finished an English school :-)) For instance, "maid" is much the same thing as "girl", and is generally used in place of "female servant".

Keep up!

Trans Later   13.06.2003 15:56   •   Заявить о нарушении
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Thank you but those lines was written in such a rush, that even my "forces", as you said, didn't help me. It's better you to look for some ideas than just some mistakes. Anyway, thank for something new to know, such as "servant girl".

Good luck

Gaijin   13.06.2003 21:48   Заявить о нарушении
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