Requiem

One year has passed. I lived how must.
Memoirs-cast I thought should pass.
Reply in air – we can’t be pair.
You aren’t there but I lose care.
I day to day can’t sleep again,
And shining pane does my life pain.
If I’m on streets the something tips
Me to some bits of unknown deep.

I don’t know why I need your smile.
There’s no to try, friendship is failed.
So I regard, my heart is hurt
By spring. I cut your photos, but
Wherever be, my thoughts not free.
U yet in me so I should see
All what I do is never true.
I must review that I love you.

All how should be, of course.
Blood throws my feels above.
All that occurs is cause
My requiem about love.

Core isn’t peace, I need your kiss
And write now verse about this.
I think not right to catch your sight,
But sense’s tide makes your eyes bright
So I confuse and can’t refuse.
Forsake your ruse, my painful muse!
I know now all. I know why cold
Your care though… My bent shall fall.

All how should be, of course.
Blood throws my feels above.
All that occurs is cause
My requiem about love.


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Very good, deeply felt poem. But unfortunately there are problems with the grammar. For instance, "blood throws my feels above". Did you mean "feelings"? But if it's spoken English - then I cannot be a judge.

With best regards,

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