When blazing sun is down,
And streets are dark and calm.
When night unfolds through town.
I reach for your firm palm.
I gently kiss her lips,
She trembles with my touch.
She starts to move her hips.
I love her very much!
My heart bursts into flame,
The sky spins in a whirl.
And stars above us shame:
-“Girl should not kiss a girl.”
Kissing A Girl
© Copyright: Basantsov Robert, 2003
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Здравствуйте Роберт!
Стих хороший... Теперь понятно, почему Вы сравнили мой стишок с Вашими! Они также не обделены чувством юмора! :-)
Успехов!
С уважением, Лика :-)
p.s.: By the way, could you explain me please, why "the girl should not kiss a girl"?
Лика Аскарходжаева 30.05.2003 21:36 • Заявить о нарушении
Стих хороший... Теперь понятно, почему Вы сравнили мой стишок с Вашими! Они также не обделены чувством юмора! :-)
Успехов!
С уважением, Лика :-)
p.s.: By the way, could you explain me please, why "the girl should not kiss a girl"?
Лика Аскарходжаева 30.05.2003 21:36 • Заявить о нарушении
Hello Lika.
Excuse me for a delayed answer, bt I was AFK.
Thank you very much for you review, I fgreatly appreciate it.
Girl should not kiss a girl because.....
well there ca be 1001 reason not to, but I realy believe that there is only one reason to - love.
All the other reasons are ones that oppose it.
But I was talking with my frends, and the idea just popped up. In addition it was April 1st when I wrote it, so it was a kind of thing to break reader's anticipation I needed.
Thank you very much and good luck.
Robert B.
Basantsov Robert 04.07.2003 22:36 Заявить о нарушении
Excuse me for a delayed answer, bt I was AFK.
Thank you very much for you review, I fgreatly appreciate it.
Girl should not kiss a girl because.....
well there ca be 1001 reason not to, but I realy believe that there is only one reason to - love.
All the other reasons are ones that oppose it.
But I was talking with my frends, and the idea just popped up. In addition it was April 1st when I wrote it, so it was a kind of thing to break reader's anticipation I needed.
Thank you very much and good luck.
Robert B.
Basantsov Robert 04.07.2003 22:36 Заявить о нарушении
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