Please Hate Me

I have to tell you something,
I cannot hold inside.
I have a feeling for you,
So strong, I almost cried.

Somebody said, that feeling is
Quite blind, and I can tell.
I beg you, open up my mind,
And break this blinding spell.

Please tell me that I scare you,
Please tell me -«SUCK MY ASS!».
Please tell me that when I’m around,
You feel you want to pass.

Please tell me that I’m not your type,
Please tell me, I’m not one.
Please tell me that, when we together,
You don’t have any fun.

Please tell me that you hate me,
Please tell me that I’m jerk,
Please tell me you despise me,
Please say -«It will not work!».

On other hand, if there’s a chance,
Accept this humble note.
You may consider new romance,
And let the feelings float.


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real good,I like it, like the other one it sounds, 4me, more like a song than like a poem & it's cool:)

Вишнева Соня   07.05.2003 23:04     Заявить о нарушении
Thank you very much for your idea.
I will try to put some music to it when I will have some free time.

Sincerely yours
Robert B.

Basantsov Robert   08.05.2003 01:46   Заявить о нарушении
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