When I don't realize what I achieve
And silently I look around this place
To see the sight of what would I believe -
I always find the truth I cannot face,
And thinking of one a good day to leave -
My time has left no trace.
It always means the same, it always ends the same,
And no one ever could it understand:
With a quiet evil I watch the final of the game,
For my bad omen's never out of hand!..
Creation of my inner pride and fears -
That's mine belief! - it always will be here, -
It makes its justice and it reigns upright
And serves to destroy all that I have tried...
(written somewhere in 1997)
Bad Clairvoyance
© Copyright: Fred, 2002
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...when such a desperation fills your heart,
regrets and sorrows tear your soul apart,
be sure that you will come out to the light
and you will win in your eternal fight...
you may change faces, colours, faith and creed,
be lost and found, wealthy and in need,
but in your quest for truth you shall succeed -
...for poets have angelic souls indeed... : )
for U only, Fred - you are a great guy and a fascinating poet : ) wish i could hear ur music too : )
Amanda Dee 10.08.2002 00:33 • Заявить о нарушении
regrets and sorrows tear your soul apart,
be sure that you will come out to the light
and you will win in your eternal fight...
you may change faces, colours, faith and creed,
be lost and found, wealthy and in need,
but in your quest for truth you shall succeed -
...for poets have angelic souls indeed... : )
for U only, Fred - you are a great guy and a fascinating poet : ) wish i could hear ur music too : )
Amanda Dee 10.08.2002 00:33 • Заявить о нарушении
Well, concerning me (humbly smiling) my mom and friends consider me neither and say that I'm just an alcoholic :) Thank you, I'm very glad that my rhymes are touching you somehow. I just try to do my best. Pleased to hear such words from a poet whose lines just enchant my very soul.
About my music - I play bass in a brutal death metal band called "Obsessed by Seth" here in Novosibirsk (do I scare you? :). We are just finishing our demo recording (we have to fix the sound somehow, 'cause here it's hard to make a proper record). When I'll have it finished I'll give you URL, hope you will hear it.
I'll be very pleased to see you again.
Yours sincerely,
Fred 13.08.2002 08:55 Заявить о нарушении
About my music - I play bass in a brutal death metal band called "Obsessed by Seth" here in Novosibirsk (do I scare you? :). We are just finishing our demo recording (we have to fix the sound somehow, 'cause here it's hard to make a proper record). When I'll have it finished I'll give you URL, hope you will hear it.
I'll be very pleased to see you again.
Yours sincerely,
Fred 13.08.2002 08:55 Заявить о нарушении
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