this is just a tiny little note
Bacause it is high time i wrote
To tell you how i really feel
About my love that is so real
I wake up every single morning
And before i have finished yawning
before i have stretched out like a cat
i just have to tell you that
In all my thoughts in every way
i love you more and more each day
A tiny little note
© Copyright: Антонина Тесленко, 2002
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Are you writing for Harlequin romances?
or for "forget me not" notes?
This is fluffy....it's cutesy, i wouldn't say it's poetic trash, but I think you could have done much more with it.
Even tender poetry should carry a meaning, have some depth to it, this is all on the surface.
Athena Prose 27.04.2002 22:48 • Заявить о нарушении
or for "forget me not" notes?
This is fluffy....it's cutesy, i wouldn't say it's poetic trash, but I think you could have done much more with it.
Even tender poetry should carry a meaning, have some depth to it, this is all on the surface.
Athena Prose 27.04.2002 22:48 • Заявить о нарушении
i am writing for myself and your irony is very unpolite . i suppose you are a very turned up person if not to say more about your remarks .. dont you agree with this ?HA
Антонина Тесленко 29.04.2002 12:26 Заявить о нарушении
Антонина Тесленко 29.04.2002 12:26 Заявить о нарушении
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