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He was alone, he wasn't lonely.
He didn't want to be disturbed.
His life was passing, passing slowly.
He didn't want to be disturbed.

He never seen the world around,
He didn't care, didn't want.
He was considered to be proud.
He didn't care, didn't want.

He died alone, noone to bury.
He came to Heaven, still alone.
He had no sins, nothing to worry.
He was in Heaven, but alone.

-How did you live,-was asked by Lord.
-I wanted love, but never had.
-But did you ask?
                -Did not, my Lord.
-You didn't ask..well, it is sad...

-How did you live,-was asked again,
Lord wasn't smiling, was so sad.
-No happness,-he said in pain.
-You didn't seek,-Jesus looked mad.

-How did you live,-and he just left.
He wasn't in Heaven or on earth.
He did regretted, that he simply left.
He was in between--could not be worse.

And e cried to Jesus who seemed to befar
In Heaven, forbidden behind the door lock.
-Why is the door closed, unreachable star?
Jesus was crying:But you didn't knock...


Mathew 7:7
Ask and it will be given to you; seek, and you will find; knock, and it will be opened to you.


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Hi Evvie,
it's nice to meet you again at this site and be confirmed in the opinion that you're a really talented person... Let me agree absolutely, just 100% with Arthur - this verse is bloody marvellous! Together with your Christian Sonnet and some other poems it forms an extremely sensible and talented piece of art. I dare to say it would make an honor to any modern poet. So I am just eager to congratulate you with such a success and kindly ask to continue to write such beautiful poetry. As you probably remember my own opinion on God, religion and all that stuff is a little bit different, but I do respect yours and admire your talent. Hope you feel better now (I mean your homeseek and lonelyness) - well, you are not that lonely: at least some Stihira's readers here in Russia care about you :)

All the best
Cyril

Cyril   29.03.2002 11:54     Заявить о нарушении
Hello Cyril,
I just want to thank you for your warm words. It just made my day, honest! Just hard to express what I feel...Oh well, I guess it's happiness and joy. Thaaaaaanksssss!!!
But though it embarassed me a bunch too... because it's just... Thanks...
And lonelyness..yes I feel it a bunch and it hurts... But it pushes me to write and draw that's neat about that...
Thanks for your support alot!!!

Best regards--huge grattitude,

Evvie

Evvie Rough   30.03.2002 01:54   Заявить о нарушении
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